The oldest person I know , That I admire the most to write about would have to be my BIG MA. She passed away but she was my dad's mom. She was the most beautiful lady ever, she had a smile that lit up the world. She could make a person laugh in a minute, but when you did something you wasnt supposed to, there was no laughing the only sound you heard was crying. Big Ma didnt play, you was going to respect any and everybody in her house. She was the type you could run to and tell your problems and she would take you and sit you down and explain how life is, and if she had any similar stories growing up she would tell us and explain what she had to do. Big Ma loved all her grand children, we had all the get togethers at her house, it didnt matter who you didnt like you had to suck it up because you just knew when a holiday or special day came around you was going to see that person. Big Ma wanted all her family to get along, because that just it the thing was that we were family it was no point and not liking your family. Big Ma may be gone but she is never forgotten, and we all make sure we try our best to apply her same courage, and determination on down. Making sure that everyone know about her and how wonderful she was :)
R.I.P BIG MA... ILoveeeeYou :-*
Touching story, but sort of hard to follow along. I got confused on certain parts.
ReplyDelete"She could make a person laugh in a minute, but when you did something you wasnt supposed to, there was no laughing the only sound you heard was crying" You might want to make that clearer.
"Big Ma wanted all her family to get along, [because that just it the thing was that we were family it was no point and not liking your family]." Confusing! I got fustrated just reading it. I get what you are saying, but how you say it is not clear. Try this: "Big Ma wanted all her family to get along. Because we are family, we might as well get along."
I see you speak a lot of slang...Do NOT write how you TALK. Get rid of that habit.
"try our best to apply her same courage"
Apply her courage on what exactly? You mean have the same courage as...?